The Giggle
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I loved reading this. I think you've nailed down the scene vividly. The rhyme and pacing is also done right.
I liked how you took the time to end it properly, and not just leave it halfway after having introduced us to the roach and the beetle.
Great stuff!
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The Giggle - by Namyh - 08-27-2021, 04:48 PM
RE: The Giggle - by dukealien - 08-30-2021, 06:29 AM
RE: The Giggle - by Tiger the Lion - 08-30-2021, 07:57 AM
RE: The Giggle - by busker - 09-03-2021, 08:26 PM



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