08-30-2021, 06:29 AM
This is a very entertaining concept. I see it using insects in place of brownies or elves or leprechauns, and baseball in place of dancing on the green.
Critique was not requested, but I can't help noticing how this approaches a Kipling or Robert W. Service rhythm and would be really terrific if that were sustained.
And... continuity! When the lights went out, wasn't the moon still up?
Critique was not requested, but I can't help noticing how this approaches a Kipling or Robert W. Service rhythm and would be really terrific if that were sustained.
And... continuity! When the lights went out, wasn't the moon still up?
Non-practicing atheist