We Are the Toys of Time
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Busker,

Thanks for reading and critiquing.  I was thinking of the gnostic God, so I figured he could reside wherever he wants to.  Close by, so he can mess with us.  Second strophe is more or less a translation of an example of the use of the word "toy" in Middle English in the OED.

Anyway, the stuff you picked out as best is what I wrote myself without cribbing from the OED.  So maybe there is something here.

It's always nice to hear something, even in Fun and Miscellaneous. 

TqB
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We Are the Toys of Time - by TranquillityBase - 08-22-2021, 11:59 PM
RE: We Are the Toys of Time - by dukealien - 08-23-2021, 11:10 AM
RE: We Are the Toys of Time - by TranquillityBase - 08-23-2021, 08:22 PM
RE: We Are the Toys of Time - by busker - 08-29-2021, 12:00 PM
RE: We Are the Toys of Time - by TranquillityBase - 08-29-2021, 07:30 PM



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