Critique my critique basic
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I think this is a good opportunity to get to know each other poetically, and stop beating around the I post this you post that bush.

What is it like, experience, as you are writing?

This is an open question.

I'm not going to read and critique the poem.


When I'm good I'm good. When I'm bad I'm better.

And doesn't cut it because it's not a knife but a butter.

We don't want butter we want eggs.

Your egg, exclusively, whoever is reading this.
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Critique my critique basic - by CRNDLSM - 08-23-2021, 02:30 AM
RE: Critique my critique basic - by dukealien - 08-23-2021, 04:40 AM
RE: Critique my critique basic - by rowens - 08-23-2021, 04:45 AM
RE: Critique my critique basic - by dukealien - 08-23-2021, 04:53 AM
RE: Critique my critique basic - by rowens - 08-23-2021, 04:54 AM



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