07-28-2021, 09:39 AM
(07-26-2021, 08:30 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote: JustBefore dawn …… detail not relevant, I feel
after a Sunday
of self-inflicted discord
my unconscious churned out ….. this and the next line take up too much space to say too little. Compress?
a poem now lost.
All that’s left is one word: …..the rhythm feels off. “What’s left is just one…” etc?
“appleyard”. ……. Have this as the title?