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07-10-2021, 03:27 AM
(07-10-2021, 02:53 AM)Knot Wrote:It would. But I try to avoid filler words for the sake of syllable count. I already have "a" in line one. I'm more inclined to present it like this...(07-10-2021, 02:47 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: "In" would actually be better than "under".Would 'in the' work? lone Inukshuk painted in northern lights-- directing wise men feels a lesser compromise. |
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7-5-21 - by Tiger the Lion - 07-06-2021, 10:08 AM
RE: 7-5-21 - by dukealien - 07-07-2021, 09:43 PM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Tiger the Lion - 07-08-2021, 07:29 AM
RE: 7-5-21 - by dukealien - 07-08-2021, 10:03 PM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Knot - 07-09-2021, 11:07 PM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Tiger the Lion - 07-10-2021, 02:47 AM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Knot - 07-10-2021, 02:53 AM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Tiger the Lion - 07-10-2021, 03:27 AM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Knot - 07-10-2021, 10:12 PM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Magpie - 07-14-2021, 08:58 PM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Poetry In Motion - 07-15-2021, 01:39 PM
RE: 7-5-21 - by Tiger the Lion - 07-16-2021, 04:17 AM
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