Guadalupe River Haiku - edit

[TranquillityBase]

Abandoned like the full moon,  How about "as a new moon" instead? The new moon does appear a bit abandoned. At least to me it does; a full moon, not so much.  That, plus, "young/new" kinda go together.  Since the hawks are probably crying out for food, that makes "full" an even iffier choice.

I was orignally wanting to use "new moon" but it was waxing at the time.  But hey, this is confirmation I was right in the first place.  New last line in place as well.  Another stab in the haiku dark.

They are back, at least one of them.