07-05-2021, 07:36 PM
I'm trying to match in my head the phrase I'm reading with your background and description, and what I'm left with is wondering how the moon is motherless, or could mutter and sigh, 'like' the Hawks. I think the motherless moon is what you really want to describe but I'm not getting it from the Hawk description. I think youre close.
Maybe some punctuation would help. I didn't mean to say the moon mutters and sighs.
Maybe some punctuation would help. I didn't mean to say the moon mutters and sighs.