05-28-2021, 09:50 AM
At first look, seeing five lines, I thought this might be a tanka. And, allowing for language differences, it might well be.
Delightful in varied ways to read, enforced by brevity: are "we" two people entwined, etc., or two people metaphorically like electric currents... or two actual wires personified as having human qualities?
(There's probably a right answer but I'm moving, so I'm slow.)
Delightful in varied ways to read, enforced by brevity: are "we" two people entwined, etc., or two people metaphorically like electric currents... or two actual wires personified as having human qualities?
(There's probably a right answer but I'm moving, so I'm slow.)
Non-practicing atheist