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05-06-2021, 10:01 PM

I'm not going to get in between Mark and his onomatopoeia again Smile

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but I am going to push back a little on the Islamic aspect. I detect no Islamophobia in this piece. The Islam of the Conquest and the Islamic fundamentalists people fear today are apples and oranges.
If you take out the Islamic, you lose the scimitars and tympani (I can hear them), the camels, all the exoticism.
I looked it up and they were called Rashidun cavalry. So I guess you could replace Islamic with that.

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War Drum - edit2 - by dukealien - 05-04-2021, 10:52 PM

RE: War Drum - by Majestic Sun - 05-04-2021, 10:58 PM

RE: War Drum - by Knot - 05-05-2021, 12:43 AM

RE: War Drum - by Thunderembargo - 05-05-2021, 12:55 AM

RE: War Drum - by Mark A Becker - 05-05-2021, 06:20 AM

RE: War Drum - by TranquillityBase - 05-05-2021, 06:58 AM

RE: War Drum - by Mark A Becker - 05-05-2021, 07:34 AM

RE: War Drum - edit - by dukealien - 05-06-2021, 11:50 AM

RE: War Drum - edit - by TranquillityBase - 05-06-2021, 12:32 PM

RE: War Drum - edit - by Mark A Becker - 05-06-2021, 08:57 PM

RE: War Drum - edit - by TranquillityBase - 05-06-2021, 10:01 PM

RE: War Drum - edit - by Mark A Becker - 05-06-2021, 10:17 PM

RE: War Drum - edit - by TranquillityBase - 05-06-2021, 10:24 PM

RE: War Drum - edit - by Mark A Becker - 05-06-2021, 11:52 PM

RE: War Drum - edit2 - by dukealien - 05-09-2021, 08:08 AM

RE: War Drum - edit2 - by Mark A Becker - 05-09-2021, 09:28 AM

RE: War Drum - edit2 - by Erthona - 05-13-2021, 07:42 PM

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