Around Back

[Majestic Sun]

It seems to be night
inside and out
outside out. (how can night be inside and out? What does that mean?)

Wait.
This is where
waiting gives back a moment. (interesting thought, go on)

Four days dead
Lazarus had no words left,
waiting for the second time around.

Around back
you will find
a third time, because
the living hate nothing
like a void.

End with a love song
about it lost
maybe in the night
maybe not at all.

What were you trying to say in the last two stanzas? I don't get it, I also didn't understand the first stanza, sorry.


This is insufficient critique for this forum.
—Quix