War Drum - edit2

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War Drum                          i like the title


Electric dryer loaded with
half-damp clothes and
woolly balls intended to
keep them separate
thunders random kettle-drumming
from the laundry alcove
like camel-slung tympani
beating a fervent charge for
scimitar-wielding Muslim cavalry
in their bright dawn of empire.


I was just reading yesterday, from my friends discourse and conversation, about the enlightenment of the Muslim world that program-existed on the Spanish Peninsula before Ferdinand and Isabella launched a world-ending inquisition blitzkrieg on the mosques and towers of the lands of flying carpets and hooka pipes.   It was Al Khwarizmi, afterall, who invented the very Calculus-Algebrra (from the arabi word al-jabr) which informed Descartes how to dream in coordinate graph

A little domestic reverie, could go in "For Fun," but how might it be improved?