Spring Lament
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You're welcome. TqB. I tend to overuse punctuation too; or I underuse it. Reading my poems out loud seems to help, sometimes.

I know a bit of e.e. cummings, e.g. the one about carrying your heart and something about flowers bowing to each other. 


I do like the d
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                  it's true  Thumbsup
All best,
Leaf
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Spring Lament - by TranquillityBase - 04-16-2021, 10:25 PM
RE: Spring Lament - by Mark A Becker - 04-17-2021, 09:34 AM
RE: Spring Lament - by TranquillityBase - 04-17-2021, 10:01 AM
RE: Spring Lament - by Knot - 04-17-2021, 10:11 PM
RE: Spring Lament - by TranquillityBase - 04-17-2021, 10:52 PM
RE: Spring Lament - by Knot - 04-17-2021, 11:20 PM
RE: Spring Lament - by Leaf - 04-18-2021, 01:40 AM
RE: Spring Lament - by TranquillityBase - 04-18-2021, 02:20 AM
RE: Spring Lament - by Leaf - 04-19-2021, 05:51 AM



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