cut me some slack
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I really identified with this poem.  My critique: the poem seems to start out talking about something very specific, e.g. craft, and I'm thinking you mean writing poems, but then it goes kind of universal and it's a sudden switch.  Guess I'd like more specifics or a more gradual shift, if that makes any sense.

I scratched my head a bit at "peg legs"
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cut me some slack - by newsclippings - 04-04-2021, 03:08 PM
RE: cut me some slack - by TranquillityBase - 04-05-2021, 06:25 AM
RE: cut me some slack - by Semicircle - 03-23-2022, 12:17 AM



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