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Hello t.base-

First off, let me offer condolences for the loss of your son.
That is every parents worst fear, and I can only hope that he lives in your heart.
If you would be so kind as to let me know his name, I will offer a prayer.  Like you, I have studied the Bible, though I do not claim adherence to any specific doctrine.

Regarding your poem- I think Knot masterfully rearranged YOUR lines.  I would claim his input, as he insightfully arranged YOUR words in a very constructive manner ( great work Knot!).
No need to be embarrassed- consider knot your esteemed editor.

... Mark
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Around Back - by TranquillityBase - 02-24-2021, 02:58 AM
RE: Around Back - by Miley - 02-26-2021, 07:08 AM
RE: Around Back - by TranquillityBase - 02-26-2021, 11:10 AM
RE: Around Back - by Knot - 02-26-2021, 09:45 PM
RE: Around Back - by TranquillityBase - 02-27-2021, 12:48 AM
RE: Around Back - by Knot - 02-27-2021, 04:02 AM
RE: Around Back - by Mark A Becker - 03-22-2021, 06:18 AM
RE: Around Back - by TranquillityBase - 03-23-2021, 04:40 AM
RE: Around Back - by Mark A Becker - 03-23-2021, 11:54 PM
RE: Around Back - by Majestic Sun - 05-05-2021, 01:21 PM



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