i'm leaving in the morning
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As something of a pyro-philiac, I enjoyed this meditation on the fire.  I don't feel qualified to comment on the quality of your sonnet form, but multiple readings and I sort of settled into that and could appreciate the content.  

I don't think you want a question mark after "I think of none" or did you mean it to be a question?  And the title doesn't seem to have much to do with the poem.
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i'm leaving in the morning - by hcadship - 03-09-2021, 10:34 AM
RE: i'm leaving in the morning - by milo - 03-09-2021, 10:43 AM
RE: i'm leaving in the morning - by TranquillityBase - 03-10-2021, 01:33 AM



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