02-26-2021, 09:45 PM
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Hi TqB,
I get lost on 'outside out' and 'about it lost'
but lines like 'waiting gives back a moment' are excellent.
I think you might do more with your line endings
and for some reason I want this to start with S5.
Some cut and paste thoughts
End with a love song
maybe in the night
maybe not at all.
It seems to be night
inside and out. Wait.
This is where
waiting gives back
a moment. Four days
dead Lazarus had no words
left, waiting
for the second time
around.
Around back
you will find
a third time,
because the living hate
nothing
like a void.
Best, Knot
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