02-26-2021, 01:01 PM
Thank you for reading, and offering you feedback everyone, I appreciate it!
I'm not sure why I'm drawn to the stilted linebreaks/enjambment. I've edited it to make it read smoother. I look forward to looking at both versions in the future when I've got some distance. At any rate, very minor changes.. I may make a few more, unsure.
I'm not sure why I'm drawn to the stilted linebreaks/enjambment. I've edited it to make it read smoother. I look forward to looking at both versions in the future when I've got some distance. At any rate, very minor changes.. I may make a few more, unsure.