Love Poem <3
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Paul's suggestion about ending: how about just dropping "we share" and leaving "aurora borealis"
i think the sharing is understood.  Love use of "ouroboros" but maybe it shouldn't be capitalized if "aurora borealis" is not.
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Love Poem <3 - by Miley - 02-19-2021, 11:44 AM
RE: Love Poem <3 - by Tiger the Lion - 02-19-2021, 03:28 PM
RE: Love Poem <3 - by TranquillityBase - 02-19-2021, 11:30 PM
RE: Love Poem <3 - by arbil_poieo - 02-22-2021, 03:48 AM
RE: Love Poem <3 - by alonso ramoran - 02-23-2021, 02:55 AM
RE: Love Poem <3 - by Miley - 02-26-2021, 01:01 PM
RE: Love Poem <3 - by busker - 02-26-2021, 01:12 PM
RE: Love Poem <3 - by Knot - 02-26-2021, 09:55 PM



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