Love Poem <3

[Tiger the Lion]

Hey Miley, lots to like here. A few thoughts below...

We share an alarm clock, personally like this better as one line. Starts off with a strong statement.
getting dressed and un-
dressed, a pillow, and a mouth— a sexy enjambment here
coming into our own
Ouroboros. 

Love is not
tinder, spark, flame, "tinder" plays a cheeky role here. Nice 
But abundance, abundance, abundance
abundance—we share
aurora borealis.

I almost want the poem to end after "abundance, abundance, abundance, abundance" but if not I might suggest "Wawatay" as a title.

Thanks for the read,
Paul