02-15-2021, 03:25 AM
(02-15-2021, 02:36 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: iced in and cut offHaving just braved an ice storm (yes, that one, but on 35E instead of 35W) this definitely resonates, sitting at home today and (obviously) tele-writing instead of doing anything useful. "[C]ut" and "razor" work nicely. I must say that "rain," though rhyming aptly with "razor," seems a bit off; "sleet," however, is hard to pronounce ahead of "like." You may have the best of it there.
powerless in winter’s grip
rain like razor wire
Cut-grip-razor raises suitably unpleasant images of isolation-engendered suicidal thoughts - stay with us, Mark! Spring is just around, well, two or three corners.
Non-practicing atheist

