Burble
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Hi Miley,

The more times I read this, the more I want the first line to go away.  Then it seems almost perfect.  At least it all fits together into a message that has nothing to do with that first line.

It would also be cool to center align the italicized section.

With or without that line, it's a striking poem.  Perfect attendance indeed!

Tim
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Burble - by Miley - 02-14-2021, 08:30 AM
RE: Burble - by TranquillityBase - 02-14-2021, 09:22 AM
RE: Burble - by alonso ramoran - 02-16-2021, 04:35 AM



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