A Question for John
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The second stanza is a description of the pit as it looks today, mainly, until the question, which I didn't deliberately delay, but I like it showing up unexpectedly.

You've given some things to consider here.  Definitely implementing your change in last line.

Thanks for the read.

Thanks, Busker, for the kind words and I like your suggestion.
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Messages In This Thread
A Question for John - by TranquillityBase - 02-10-2021, 03:07 AM
RE: A Question for John - by Knot - 02-10-2021, 11:38 PM
RE: A Question for John - by TranquillityBase - 02-11-2021, 12:46 AM
RE: A Question for John - by busker - 02-11-2021, 12:11 AM
RE: A Question for John - by Knot - 02-11-2021, 02:04 AM
RE: A Question for John - by TranquillityBase - 02-11-2021, 02:23 AM
RE: A Question for John - by Knot - 02-11-2021, 03:09 AM
RE: A Question for John - by TranquillityBase - 02-11-2021, 09:09 AM
RE: A Question for John - by Knot - 02-11-2021, 10:07 PM
RE: A Question for John - by Thunderembargo - 02-21-2021, 12:21 AM
RE: A Question for John - by TranquillityBase - 02-21-2021, 09:57 AM



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