02-03-2021, 10:37 PM
(02-03-2021, 04:40 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: Cutting a trail uphill through cedarI'm not reviewing this, but enjoyed reading through.
Towards a grove of Spanish oak
I sat upon the ground to rest,
And prised up a stone from between my knees.
Wiping away the dried caliche,
I held a palm-sized, rocket-shaped flint point.
I had to stare at it before my eyes believed,
That I held an unfinished stone-age tool,
Left behind 400 years ago by a human like me,
But unutterably not me.
I seemed to watch myself remove the point
And discover it again and again.
I stood up and held it outstretched,
And gave a self-conscious shout
To no one but the cedar and the oaks,
A shout of joy: I’d been able to touch his hand
Outside of the centuries of dead between us.
Q. Don't you mean 4000 years, not 400? The Stone-Age ended 4000-5000 years ago.
A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.

