The Sheer Ubiquitousness...
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I read the whole poem, and found the pattern of the lines to be a hindrance in reading. I think it's overdone. The poem itself is splendid.
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The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by John - 01-21-2021, 12:30 AM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by CRNDLSM - 01-21-2021, 02:02 AM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by John - 01-21-2021, 02:48 AM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by dukealien - 01-21-2021, 09:33 AM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by busker - 01-21-2021, 09:59 AM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by CRNDLSM - 01-23-2021, 10:16 AM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by busker - 01-23-2021, 10:46 AM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by rowens - 02-19-2021, 05:26 PM
RE: The Sheer Ubiquitousness... - by busker - 04-01-2021, 12:49 AM



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