my dog and I walk
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Thanks folks-

I appreciate your reactions to this short piece, and once it's cut loose, any interpretation is in the eye (ear, nose) of the reader.

I'm always interested in trying to work within a specific form, like the 5-7-5 haiku, then hoping that upon removing the framework, only a discernible "smell" remains: sorta like a fart that you blame on the dog.

... Mark
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my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 01-09-2021, 12:24 PM
RE: my dog and I walk - by busker - 01-09-2021, 12:39 PM
RE: my dog and I walk - by dukealien - 01-10-2021, 08:11 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2021, 04:08 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Semicircle - 04-26-2022, 12:34 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 04-26-2022, 07:18 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Semicircle - 04-26-2022, 07:32 AM



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