01-19-2021, 12:23 AM
edit1;
It’s more important
to have a map
than that it correspond exactly
with terrain you travel.
Likewise a calendar:
it needn’t match
your present month, just show
succeeding days to live.
Thanks to both critics. I hope this revision (which went a bit further than expected) aids understanding - if not agreement - while aligning with the general theme of simplification and something like explanation.
It’s more important
to have a map
than that it correspond exactly
with terrain you travel.
Likewise a calendar:
it needn’t match
your present month, just show
succeeding days to live.
Thanks to both critics. I hope this revision (which went a bit further than expected) aids understanding - if not agreement - while aligning with the general theme of simplification and something like explanation.
Non-practicing atheist

