01-13-2021, 02:44 PM
Some of the sentences I a bit problematic.
"She is an orchid
midsummer bloom
and blowing into
Autumn."
to
She is an orchid;
a midsummer bloom
blowing into
Autumn.
This seems a smoother more clear way to say what you seem to be saying.Sometimes writing things out in a one line sentence help to clarify in ones mind the meaning in the line.
Just an observation,
best,
dale
"She is an orchid
midsummer bloom
and blowing into
Autumn."
to
She is an orchid;
a midsummer bloom
blowing into
Autumn.
This seems a smoother more clear way to say what you seem to be saying.Sometimes writing things out in a one line sentence help to clarify in ones mind the meaning in the line.
Just an observation,
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.