my dog and I walk
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Well expressed.  I liked "the" before "trail," suggesting it may be the only one (the all-encompassing Way).  Also "scents," perhaps punning on the viewpoint character's search for meaning (sense) in things.  The sibilants in the last line are also nice.
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my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 01-09-2021, 12:24 PM
RE: my dog and I walk - by busker - 01-09-2021, 12:39 PM
RE: my dog and I walk - by dukealien - 01-10-2021, 08:11 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2021, 04:08 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Semicircle - 04-26-2022, 12:34 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 04-26-2022, 07:18 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Semicircle - 04-26-2022, 07:32 AM



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