When I stopped believing
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Rowens,

The ONLY thing of consequence to this author is the reader's opinion of THE POEM.

Are there any obvious errors that need addressing, does it flow well, do the rhymes work, does the theme and message come across,
is the poem entertaining in some small way? You know, that sort of thing - that might actually be useful in improving my poetry.

Merry New Year...............P
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Messages In This Thread
When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-09-2020, 04:42 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by CRNDLSM - 12-09-2020, 11:49 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by dukealien - 12-09-2020, 12:07 PM
RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-09-2020, 12:23 PM
RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-09-2020, 10:18 PM
RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 12-20-2020, 06:48 PM
RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 12-20-2020, 10:23 PM
RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-21-2020, 09:44 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 12-31-2020, 01:08 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-31-2020, 07:44 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 12-31-2020, 09:32 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 01-01-2021, 12:16 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 01-01-2021, 01:06 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 01-01-2021, 02:30 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 01-01-2021, 03:27 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by Erthona - 01-01-2021, 06:30 AM
RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 01-01-2021, 09:38 PM



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