Christmas Forgotten
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Thanks for the critique Duke. I used to use the em dash a lot more, but I have gone away from that as it seemed so affected: that's my problem though. The rest I can take on-board, good suggestions all I think.

best,

dale
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Christmas Forgotten - by Erthona - 12-12-2020, 11:04 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by dukealien - 12-13-2020, 08:47 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Erthona - 12-14-2020, 02:31 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Mark A Becker - 12-15-2020, 03:13 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Erthona - 12-15-2020, 04:10 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Mark A Becker - 12-15-2020, 05:14 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Erthona - 12-16-2020, 06:36 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Mark A Becker - 12-16-2020, 08:00 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Erthona - 12-21-2020, 01:34 PM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Mark A Becker - 12-24-2020, 01:52 PM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by philip - 12-29-2020, 07:54 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Erthona - 12-30-2020, 05:14 AM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by philip - 12-30-2020, 02:15 PM
RE: Christmas Forgotten - by Erthona - 12-31-2020, 01:38 AM



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