When I stopped believing

When I stopped believing

philip Offline

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12-09-2020, 10:18 PM

Hello Duke,

Thank you for dropping by and commenting.

I'm not that bothered about perfect meter (obviously!) as long as the poem reads OK.
Some rhymes are forced? - Which ones?

I am orphaned by my father - Father Christmas of course.

cheers.................P

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When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-09-2020, 04:42 AM

RE: When I stopped believing - by CRNDLSM - 12-09-2020, 11:49 AM

RE: When I stopped believing - by dukealien - 12-09-2020, 12:07 PM

RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-09-2020, 12:23 PM

RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-09-2020, 10:18 PM

RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 12-20-2020, 06:48 PM

RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 12-20-2020, 10:23 PM

RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-21-2020, 09:44 AM

RE: When I stopped believing - by rowens - 12-31-2020, 01:08 AM

RE: When I stopped believing - by philip - 12-31-2020, 07:44 AM