fall-moon (haiku)

[dukealien]

fall-moon lends silver;

the small change of golden rays

stolen from the sun

Quite  nice concept (though my detail hobgoblin argues that the moon's only a fence if she stole those golden rays   ).  Might suggest colon or em dash rather than semicolon after L1 due to the close connection.

If you'll pardon the rewrite, the transaction could be kept on the up-and-up by making L3

     the sun invested

but L2 would then need to change, avoiding "the" at the start of both lines.  Just sayin'

Nice one, thanks for posting!