Love Poem

[Wordsfrom1985]

Great piece of words flowing together ❤

We met before
Many times over
This was different,
Everything grows alive
The sun smiles and cascades every passing mountain
Flowers stare and grow bigger and brighter
And then I go and spoil it all
By saying something stupid like "I love you"


Any help would be greatly appreciated! 
I wanted to write a short sweet poem for my GF's birthday coming up and she is a writer herself so I don't want to completely embarrass myself! 

Thank you!

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