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Under the night sky
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10-31-2020, 12:54 AM
I Have to agree with others on this, the poem could use some more drama. Perhaps a stanza between the current two could accomplish this. Also, the poem could use a little structure, whether this means following a syllable pattern or rhyme scheme. Even loosely following one would give it a little rhythm or flow.
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Under the night sky - by julevin1 - 08-30-2020, 11:26 AM
RE: Under the night sky - by mizron - 09-03-2020, 09:05 AM
RE: Under the night sky - by busker - 09-05-2020, 03:27 PM
RE: Under the night sky - by RhythmGuy - 10-15-2020, 10:59 AM
RE: Under the night sky - by philip - 10-18-2020, 10:34 AM
RE: Under the night sky - by Baby_Hand_Feilds - 10-31-2020, 12:54 AM
RE: Under the night sky - by Erthona - 11-03-2020, 10:49 PM
RE: Under the night sky - by Socialite - 11-13-2020, 09:09 PM
RE: Under the night sky - by Bunx - 11-14-2020, 01:54 AM
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