Forest Pond - edit
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(10-25-2020, 05:25 AM)dukealien Wrote:  But not everyone knows that a non-white egret is a heron
I didn't Smile 

Hi duke,
I like the popping k sounds of the original (plus 'carp'), though also stumbled with poses (and not sure is shimmers is an improvement)
This picture
http://fineartamerica.com/images/artwork...-barry.jpg
made me wonder about 'coiled'.
('in' or 'above' for 'on'?)


Enjoyed the read. Great last line.


Best, Knot


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Forest Pond - edit - by dukealien - 10-09-2020, 10:17 PM
RE: Forest Pond - by philip - 10-19-2020, 04:57 AM
RE: Forest Pond - by Evolutionisatheory - 10-19-2020, 07:35 PM
RE: Forest Pond - edit - by dukealien - 10-21-2020, 06:27 AM
RE: Forest Pond - edit - by Magpie - 10-25-2020, 01:32 AM
RE: Forest Pond - edit - by dukealien - 10-25-2020, 05:25 AM
RE: Forest Pond - edit - by Knot - 10-28-2020, 02:12 AM



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