Forest Pond - edit

[Magpie]

Hi Duke,

I really like this concept. A couple of nits though, aren't all egrets white, is 'white' redundant?
Also I feel like the last line would work better as 'plucking carp from branches', I know it messes with the syllable count.

When I read it first I was reminded of an Escher painting called Three Worlds
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/95/a8/2b/...45b9d2.jpg

Thanks for the read,

Mark