10-19-2020, 02:51 AM
hello Knot - thank you for reading and commenting.
I appreciate your thoughts on the first verse - but I'm going for slant rhymes, and I think it works in that form.
you 'rang' sir? - yes, outrageous poetic license for the in-rhyme - if it is an issue, I'll have to rethink it...
cheers.....philip
I appreciate your thoughts on the first verse - but I'm going for slant rhymes, and I think it works in that form.
you 'rang' sir? - yes, outrageous poetic license for the in-rhyme - if it is an issue, I'll have to rethink it...
cheers.....philip