Love Poem
#3
when I'm with you
Everything grows alive
The sun smiles and cascades every passing mountain
Flowers gaze as I go by
growing bigger, brighter
all was well
And then I go and spoil it all
By saying something stupid like "I love you"

Is this better? I am trying to convey how she changed me and made me appreciate all the little things. I am runner so I wanted to convey this as well in passing mountains and going by flowers.
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Love Poem - by RhythmGuy - 10-15-2020, 06:10 AM
RE: Love Poem - by CRNDLSM - 10-15-2020, 11:14 AM
RE: Love Poem - by RhythmGuy - 10-15-2020, 05:23 PM
RE: Love Poem - by Knot - 10-15-2020, 07:53 PM
RE: Love Poem - by philip - 11-19-2020, 10:52 PM
RE: Love Poem - by Wordsfrom1985 - 11-29-2020, 01:51 AM



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