08-26-2020, 02:22 PM
hi can u please review my poem entitled "Why? Needs wants and wishes." you'll find it in the basic critique list. thanks again.
as for your poem I personally think its great it reminds me of something I would've analyzed in my 6th Grade literature class. your play on words is fairly remarkable however its a bit confusing in the line " its so metal" as well as "I'm so indy" because previously you'd said call you indy indicating it was a noun not adjective also I'm not too sure what you mean by its so metal. otherwise I think its a pretty creative poem and a great foundation to build off of.
as for your poem I personally think its great it reminds me of something I would've analyzed in my 6th Grade literature class. your play on words is fairly remarkable however its a bit confusing in the line " its so metal" as well as "I'm so indy" because previously you'd said call you indy indicating it was a noun not adjective also I'm not too sure what you mean by its so metal. otherwise I think its a pretty creative poem and a great foundation to build off of.