08-17-2020, 10:35 AM
Slap roughly a hundred more words in there, then there's something to work with. Poetry isn't headlines, it's a distillation feelings, language, it's not a spectator sport; that being said if you love writing it don't stop; it will get better.
As strange as it seems the universe wants to know you and how you perceive the world around you. We aren't getting that from so few less guided words.
As strange as it seems the universe wants to know you and how you perceive the world around you. We aren't getting that from so few less guided words.