08-13-2020, 06:26 AM
He is more than noun. Isn't that why they added the italicized words to our action language of concrete things?
The first stanza is the best, before the last line of it. But I wouldn't change that.
And it's fitting how the punctuation drops away, or just isn't there, as it goes beyond it.
The first stanza is the best, before the last line of it. But I wouldn't change that.
And it's fitting how the punctuation drops away, or just isn't there, as it goes beyond it.

