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08-13-2020, 06:11 AM

(08-13-2020, 02:20 AM)DashwoodMedia Wrote: I like it but I'm not feeling the italics.

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Sorry you got flagged, man. The italics are meant to mirror those used in a few versions of the Bible, where in the Book of Exodus YHWH reveals Himself to Moses as “I AM”. Sometimes it is not italicized, but I like that it connotes a greater sense of motion and action to even the words themselves, and God Himself is essentially suggesting that He is more verb than noun.

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hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 11:07 AM

RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-06-2020, 01:40 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 09:16 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2020, 07:27 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 01:21 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Valerie Please - 08-06-2020, 10:13 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 10:57 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Exit - 08-07-2020, 05:08 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:38 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-07-2020, 08:57 AM

RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-07-2020, 02:02 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:42 PM

RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-08-2020, 06:14 AM

RE: hummingbird - by DashwoodMedia - 08-13-2020, 02:20 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 06:11 AM

RE: hummingbird - by rowens - 08-13-2020, 06:26 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Caravano - 08-15-2020, 01:37 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-16-2020, 02:02 AM

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