hummingbird
#12
I like it but I'm not feeling the italics.

This is insufficient critique.  Please offer a more in-depth response. http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-6438.html
Thank you,
-Quix/admin
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Messages In This Thread
hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 11:07 AM
RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-06-2020, 01:40 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 09:16 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2020, 07:27 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 01:21 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Valerie Please - 08-06-2020, 10:13 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 10:57 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Exit - 08-07-2020, 05:08 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:38 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-07-2020, 08:57 AM
RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-07-2020, 02:02 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:42 PM
RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-08-2020, 06:14 AM
RE: hummingbird - by DashwoodMedia - 08-13-2020, 02:20 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 06:11 AM
RE: hummingbird - by rowens - 08-13-2020, 06:26 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Caravano - 08-15-2020, 01:37 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-16-2020, 02:02 AM



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