Three Women in a Small Town

[Valerie Please]

The “Great I Am” is a term for God, mostly used by evangelical Christians. It’s a reference to the dialogue between God and Moses in Exodus (“I am who I am.)

I agree that this is started, but definitely not finished and I want to keep messing with the structure.

Thanks for the read.

Is this poem about the lives of three characters? I didn't really understand it at first, but now I get it, also what is the "Great I Am?"

I thought this poem needed some punctuation and a change of rhyme and meter, write this in a triplet or quatrain if you will. Just a thought.

Thanks for sharing Valerie.