Three Women in a Small Town
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I don't think a simple aabb rhyme scheme works very well for narrative poetry of any respectable length. It wears out the reader's ears. I'd suggest going for something more complex, or mixing it up a little bit.

To add to that: abab is just as bad.
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Three Women in a Small Town - by Valerie Please - 08-11-2020, 10:22 AM
RE: Three Women in a Small Town - by Joyful Noise - 08-11-2020, 12:17 PM
RE: Three Women in a Small Town - by busker - 08-11-2020, 08:25 PM
RE: Three Women in a Small Town - by Knot - 08-11-2020, 10:07 PM
RE: Three Women in a Small Town - by Exit - 08-12-2020, 01:18 AM
RE: Three Women in a Small Town - by busker - 08-12-2020, 02:22 AM
RE: Three Women in a Small Town - by Exit - 08-12-2020, 02:38 AM
RE: Three Women in a Small Town - by busker - 08-15-2020, 10:00 AM
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