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08-06-2020, 01:40 PM

I love this.
Didn’t quite follow the wings / strings portion - looked like meaning was sacrificed in the temptation to rhyme
But that aside, nothing much to complain about

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hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 11:07 AM

RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-06-2020, 01:40 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 09:16 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2020, 07:27 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 01:21 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Valerie Please - 08-06-2020, 10:13 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 10:57 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Exit - 08-07-2020, 05:08 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:38 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-07-2020, 08:57 AM

RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-07-2020, 02:02 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:42 PM

RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-08-2020, 06:14 AM

RE: hummingbird - by DashwoodMedia - 08-13-2020, 02:20 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 06:11 AM

RE: hummingbird - by rowens - 08-13-2020, 06:26 AM

RE: hummingbird - by Caravano - 08-15-2020, 01:37 PM

RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-16-2020, 02:02 AM

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