hummingbird
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hummingbird

anoint me with grit and 
throw colors at me,
that i may lap up the
      nectar of life
curling my toes, i 
feel what it is to be here,
be near

     who is I AM that 
BEING would sow me in such 
fertile soil
         and
         congruently
blossom within me

rub my eyes and beat my wings
longing falls as a bow on strings
as i fit myself into place
                              squeeze myself into the gaps 
                         between
             tectonic plates



This is my very first poem to be shared with anyone besides my boyfriend lol. I would be so grateful for any and all feedback you may have! Smile
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hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 11:07 AM
RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-06-2020, 01:40 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 09:16 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2020, 07:27 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 01:21 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Valerie Please - 08-06-2020, 10:13 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-06-2020, 10:57 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Exit - 08-07-2020, 05:08 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:38 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-07-2020, 08:57 AM
RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-07-2020, 02:02 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:42 PM
RE: hummingbird - by busker - 08-08-2020, 06:14 AM
RE: hummingbird - by DashwoodMedia - 08-13-2020, 02:20 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Joyful Noise - 08-13-2020, 06:11 AM
RE: hummingbird - by rowens - 08-13-2020, 06:26 AM
RE: hummingbird - by Caravano - 08-15-2020, 01:37 PM
RE: hummingbird - by Erthona - 08-16-2020, 02:02 AM



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