Haunted Woods
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(08-06-2020, 04:04 AM)Torkelburger Wrote:  I ask the Live Oaks
at the edge of the forest,
"What are you hiding?"
I think this one performs better if the title is included. What I mean is, as a haiku the title is pretty much cheating. As a short poem the title helps the piece along (as it's meant to) without being intrusive.
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Haunted Woods - by Torkelburger - 08-06-2020, 04:04 AM
RE: Haunted Woods - by Tiger the Lion - 08-06-2020, 05:29 AM
RE: Haunted Woods - by Torkelburger - 08-06-2020, 05:57 AM
RE: Haunted Woods - by Valerie Please - 08-06-2020, 08:31 AM



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