The Tempest (Haiku)

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The Tempest (Haiku)

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08-02-2020, 11:11 AM

(07-31-2020, 12:11 AM)Torkelburger Wrote: Sunshine, then dark clouds--
Slanted rain, thunder, lightning.
Then, sunshine again.

Adam DH Torkelson

There’s too much happening in there for a haiku
It reads like prose

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The Tempest (Haiku) - by Torkelburger - 07-31-2020, 12:11 AM

RE: The Tempest (Haiku) - by busker - 08-02-2020, 11:11 AM

RE: The Tempest (Haiku) - by Exit - 08-02-2020, 11:54 PM

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